Audience Feedback

When we viewed each others opening sequences we got both negative and positive feedback. We will use this feedback to make improvements to our sequence.


Our Positives

• Very good fluent cuts
• long sciences creates a tense atmosphere 
• Different camera angles 
• Our titles are good and don't cover the screen    

Our negatives and how we will improve them 

• Titles are too quick - we will be adding in more titles as they were not finished and more shots will be put into the scene so the titles should be slower
• Some shots were too dark - to improve this we are going to refilm and use gel filters over the lights 
• Police scene, couldn't see part of the characters head - we are refilming this 
• The car scene too long - we refilmed some of this and the car drives faster and we cut the shots more